New Moduel in Progress

[taintedsoul]

Hi, I am currently working on a new moduel for my online Ravenloft game called A House of Secrets. I was wondering if some of you might take a look and give me your thoughts.

Please bear in mind that this moduel is incomplete and there is still lots of work that needs to be done on it, this is NOT a finished project!

You can find what I have typed up thus far on my blog:

http://blog.360.yahoo.com/blog-yfKP7TAl ... liy4-?p=46

Anyway, TIA and good gaming!

[alhoon]

If you need art, I could search the net, find some pictures from artists that offer them for free, change them a bit and send them to you...

[Fido]

This is pretty stupid, but the spelling's 'module'. I noticed more spelling errors than that though. Maybe you should get someone to edit them out for you when you're done with the module.
Just pointing it out. It's a bit silly, I know.



Anyway, I like it! It's not superspecial or -fantastic, but that's what I appreciate about it. Good job, really.
I especially like the cliché "Room Dedicated To The Giant Pipeorgan" (The RDTTGP, as we call it).

[taintedsoul]

Thanks for the feed back. Yeah I know my speeling sucks sometimes (that is why god created the spell checker). As for the offer of art, I would like that a lot. Just remember that this is a work in progress, so hopefully it will go from okay to great over time. ideas are always welcome though!

But, here is a question. How can I make the module better?

[taintedsoul]

Okay, I spell checked it. Here is the newest incarnation!

http://blog.360.yahoo.com/blog-yfKP7TAl ... liy4-?p=48

[Samael Hands of Stone]

Okay, I spell checked it. Here is the newest incarnation!

http://blog.360.yahoo.com/blog-yfKP7TAl ... liy4-?p=48

Not my cup of soup, but I like the enthusiasm of your writing. Very energetic and full of life.