As reported by Tonitrus (thanks, Tonitrus!), page 226 has gotten garbled.
The right-hand column, starting at the top with "is entirely different from the scholarly hierarchy..." through "... traditional discernment of omens impossible." should be moved to follow the paragraph in the left-hand column which abruptly ends with "However, the civil hierarchy" The text should resume with the two paragraphs about Artisan Lane before describing Bana Divekar and Kopa.
Many thanks!
FoS: THIS IS ADDED TO THE NEW VERSION (who would have guessed this! A hidden section break in your text )
The first paragraph ion page 17 says "While powerful, Khalvren was still a servant to the truth driving force behind the new southern armies." it should read TURE driving force.
It was my error when i submitted it, but the rest looks as intended.
From p.230, please remove the "Kiss of the Vishkanya" dread possibility.
However, because we can't possibly reduce the page count, please replace the second paragraph of the "Astronomy" section on p.187 with the following:
The nirguna moon has phases. The three days of the "new moon" each month are the three days that sacrifices must be made from each of the three cities of Sri Raji. Moreover, during the new moon, staring too long at the absent moon causes stabbing pain. Certain ascetics have sacrificed their sight by contemplating the new moon until they went blind. The waxing moon causes uneasiness in the viewer, but the waning moon causes outright fear. Only during the "full moon" does the sky feel non-threatening.
Also, please add the following paragraph before the paragraph on p.188 which begins with "GIven these oddities in the night sky...":
Even though the nirguna moon is invisible, it still eclipses the stars behind it. By carefully observing this wandering darkness in the night sky, astronomers have been able to determine that the nirguna moon still follows the same course at the visible moon did. It is the one celestial body which has not changed its course.
"A full set of (game) rules is so massively complicated that the only time they were all bound together in a single volume, they underwent gravitational collapse and became a black hole" (Adams)
Another batch of errata! Thank goodness you put up with me.
p.175, 2nd column, paragraph beginning "Hickling gave Bilotti..."
Please add a paragraph break before "Bilotti ignore her venom" and remove the break after "failing to uphold their"
p.176, 2nd column, paragraph beginning "I am indeed."
Please add a paragraph break before "Perhaps I can aid you."
p.176, 2nd column, paragraph beginning "This is not information..."
Please add a paragraph break before "You know that I am not just..."
p.177, 1st column, paragraph beginning "But they also..."
Please add quotation marks before "But..."
Please add a paragraph break before "I am a difficult man..."
p.178, 2nd column, paragraph beginning "Beware, mleccha!"
Please add a paragraph break before "Ah, Armstrong thought."
p.178, 2nd column, paragraph beginning "She certainly startled..."
Please add paragraph breaks before and after "I fear that one day... svamini."
p.179, 1st column, paragraph beginning "That would have been..."
Please add a paragraph break before "Indeed, I did not."
p.179, 1st column into 2nd column
Please remove the paragraph break between "... back to their lair." and "Oh, that lair!"
p.179, 2nd column, paragraph beginning "We did not, I'm afraid."
The sentence which begins "We took another" got cut off. It should end as follows:
"We took another captive. However, the rest we killed."
p.179, 2nd column, same paragraph
Please add a paragraph break before "Do you believe the thread destroyed?"
p.180, 2nd column, paragraph beginning "I don't have to."
Please add a paragraph break before "I should have you killed."
p.180, 2nd column, paragraph beginning "Provided you do nothing..."
Please add a paragraph break before "If you break your word..."
p.186, 1st column, paragraph beginning "Less well known..."
Please change "In addition to sloth bears" to "As well as".
p.187, 1st column, paragraph beginning "Rajian folklore describes..."
Replace "but they are usually material." with "but instead they are usually material."
p.187, "Seasons and Weather"
Please replace the first paragraph with the following:
Rajians recognize three seasons: winter, summer, and monsoon. Winter lasts from November through February, according to the Barovian Calendar. It is the temperate dry season, sometimes called "Vritra's Wrath". (Vritra is an asura of drought.) However, this name appears to be more poetic than actual, because rains still fall throughout the winter. The summer season (March through June) is marked by a rise in temperature and an increase in rainfall. However, eventually the weather worsens into the monsoon season (July through October), also known as "Indra's Wrath". (Indra is the deva of rain.)
p.188, "Timeline of Sri Raji"
Please replace "Years Age" with "Years Ago".
In the row which starts with "670BC" and "88", replace the "88" with "90".
Swap the two entries for "702BC". Replace the "56" with "58".
In the row which starts with "728BC", replace the "30" with "32".
In the first row which starts with "732BC", replace the "26" with "28".
Did nobody edit this table before submission?!?
Replace "743BC" with "745BC" in the row for "The Dark Sisters discover..." and reorder accordingly.
p.191, 1st column
"Foreign trading companies are now allowed to operate west of Muladi" should be "Foreign trading companies are not allowed to operate west of Muladi"
p.203, 2nd column
Huh. I completely forgot that I worked "anathema" into this article!
p.203, legend
"Serenit" should be "Serenity".
p.210
The section titles "Kahoda Dvivedi", "Harit", and "Nabhi" should be formatted the same as the other NPC section titles.
p.210, "Stolen Wealth"
"Dvivedi Kahoda" should be "Kahoda Dvivedi".
p.212, "The Easy Way Out"
Before "Of course, if the crew's karma is poor..." add the following:
If all goes well, then the vessel is carried to its destination, which may be anywhere in Sri Raji, whether it is a waterway or otherwise.
p.213, 1st column, top paragraph
"Falgu grief" should be "Falgu's grief".
p.213, 1st column, "Emerald Stream"
Please replace "first discovered in 740BC" with "first discovered in 741BC".
IanFordam wrote: Tue Dec 02, 2025 5:02 pm
p.226, 1st column, 1st paragraph
Please replace "grow in importance" with "has grown in important".
Do you mean "has grown in importance"
"A full set of (game) rules is so massively complicated that the only time they were all bound together in a single volume, they underwent gravitational collapse and became a black hole" (Adams)
No problem. My mother tongue is French, and I was wondering if that was a mistake or a subtelty of English that I had to learn
"A full set of (game) rules is so massively complicated that the only time they were all bound together in a single volume, they underwent gravitational collapse and became a black hole" (Adams)
"A full set of (game) rules is so massively complicated that the only time they were all bound together in a single volume, they underwent gravitational collapse and became a black hole" (Adams)
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