Von Kharkhov always seemed to overlap too much for me - his control freak nature reminds me of Azalin and Dominic D'honaire, his brutal "big brother" state mirrors Falkovnia and Darkon, his self-loathing over his monstrous side is too like Adam... all of which could have been forgiven if Valachan really called out to me as a domain but it never really caught my eye. I threw in a bit of South American flavor instead, with Von Kharkhov determined to "civilize" his country when he can't even civilize himself - in the end, VK remained much the same, but it helped me visualize the domain better (and S. American architecture is much cooler than log cabins).Rotipher of the FoS wrote: It's true that there's some overlap, but I think the difference in their attitudes makes them different enough (just) to keep both. Lukas is a predatory animal who's learned to turn human assets and sins -- cunning and charm, treachery and cruelty -- against people, and he loves being a monster in human guise. Von Kharkov is an animal who was forced to be a man, and became addicted to it, yet couldn't bear to forfeit the beastial pleasures and savagery of his panther origins. He hates the animal lurking within himself, which makes him pathetic in a way that Lukas smugly refuses to be.
If anything, IMO, Von Kharkov has more in common with Adam than with Lukas. Neither can be as "human" as he wants, and neither really cares to forfeit the freedom from moral accountability that being a "monster" supposedly grants him.
Well, that's the problem with Borca. The entire domain is beautifully set up that the whole rotten system is eating itself apart from the inside, and if either of the two horrible people in charge dies the entire system will collapse like a soggy gingerbread house. Menawhile, the two darklords themselves are trying to kill each other, making hundreds of enemies, and neither of them has any kind of supernatural resilience. It's only a matter of time before Borca is either crushed or self-destructs... but then you can't use Borca anymore and Borca's a good domain.High Priest Mikhal wrote:Ivan has made too many enemies. He's living on borrowed time (figuratively, not the poison of the same name he makes). Ratik Ubel from VRGtt Walking Dead seems like the vehicle of his imminent demise; a creature immune to his powers, able to stand against his guards, and who has a reason to want him dead.
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After fixing Easan the Mad I'd like to say that no Darklord is unsalvageable, even the crappy island of terror ones that have two sentances of cannon information on them, but King Crocodile just bores the snot out of me. He does what, exactly? Eats things? And his curse is that someday he's going to die? Okay, let's do that and get a real darklord in there. (I have some ideas on the subject that I'm going to keep mum just now.)




