Coming soon:
Page 3: November 4th
Page 4: November 11th
Page 5: November 18th
Post below if you'd like to see a Ravenloft comic updated weekly here on this forum
Hearts of Ravenkind (Discussion)
-
Phantom of the Sketchbook
- Agent of the Fraternity
- Posts: 74
- Joined: Sun Oct 28, 2007 4:33 pm
Hearts of Ravenkind (Discussion)
For the enjoyment of the Fraternity of Shadows.
Coming soon:
Page 3: November 4th
Page 4: November 11th
Page 5: November 18th
Post below if you'd like to see a Ravenloft comic updated weekly here on this forum
Coming soon:
Page 3: November 4th
Page 4: November 11th
Page 5: November 18th
Post below if you'd like to see a Ravenloft comic updated weekly here on this forum
Last edited by Phantom of the Sketchbook on Mon Apr 21, 2008 10:34 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Re: Introducing: Ravenloft, the Comic
Yes.Phantom of the Sketchbook wrote:
Post below if you'd like to see a Ravenloft comic updated weekly here on this forum
-
NeoTiamat
- Evil Genius
- Posts: 4119
- Joined: Tue Sep 12, 2006 5:00 pm
- Gender: Male
- Location: Boston, Massachusetts, USA
Pretty....... YES!
Fan Fiction forum sounds best, but I'll probably track this down anywhere you wish to put it.
Fan Fiction forum sounds best, but I'll probably track this down anywhere you wish to put it.
Ravenloft GM: Eye of Anubis, Shattered City, and Prof. Lupescu's Traveling Ghost Show
Lead Writer & Editor: VRS Files: Doppelgangers; Contributor: QtR #20, #21, #22, #23, #24
Freelance Writer for Paizo Publishing
Lead Writer & Editor: VRS Files: Doppelgangers; Contributor: QtR #20, #21, #22, #23, #24
Freelance Writer for Paizo Publishing
I second all the above....
(which by now, come to think of it, should be something like 'I seventhth all the above' ?)
Alex
(which by now, come to think of it, should be something like 'I seventhth all the above' ?)
Alex
Zumba d'Oxossi (A Stitch in Souragne)
Brother Eustace (The Devil's Dreams)
Robert de Moureaux (A New Barovia)
Brother Eustace (The Devil's Dreams)
Robert de Moureaux (A New Barovia)
-
Joël of the FoS
- Moderator
- Posts: 6664
- Joined: Sun Nov 30, 2003 1:24 pm
- Gender: Male
- Location: St-Damien, Québec
-
LordGodefroi
- Criminal Mastermind
- Posts: 144
- Joined: Fri Jan 05, 2007 11:19 pm
- Location: Wichita, KS, USA
Yes. Might be fun.
Critique:
The positive stuff:
1) Your values and textures are great ! Keep it up !
The rough spots:
1) Practice on perspective and human figure. If you keep working, you'll get better. But be aware of this and practice away from the comic strip as well.
2) Use professional (or close to professional) comic fonts. You can find comic book fonts (freeware and for purchase) at http://www.blambot.com/. Your type elements also need to be smaller. Don't use type just to fill space. Don't let your type float over your panels randomly. And absolutely don't use decorative fonts for word balloons.
3) Box off your narration. It separates written elements from visual elements. When you don't do this, your typographic elements become visual elements that must be considered as part of the art.
LordGodefroi
BFA Graphic Design
Critique:
The positive stuff:
1) Your values and textures are great ! Keep it up !
The rough spots:
1) Practice on perspective and human figure. If you keep working, you'll get better. But be aware of this and practice away from the comic strip as well.
2) Use professional (or close to professional) comic fonts. You can find comic book fonts (freeware and for purchase) at http://www.blambot.com/. Your type elements also need to be smaller. Don't use type just to fill space. Don't let your type float over your panels randomly. And absolutely don't use decorative fonts for word balloons.
3) Box off your narration. It separates written elements from visual elements. When you don't do this, your typographic elements become visual elements that must be considered as part of the art.
LordGodefroi
BFA Graphic Design
[url=http://www.classichorrorfilmboard.com/]Classic Horror Film Board[/url]
[url=http://www.halloweenartexhibit.com/]Annual Halloween Art Exhibit - Chicago[/url]
[url=http://www.halloweenartexhibit.com/]Annual Halloween Art Exhibit - Chicago[/url]
FDA APPROVES
NUTRITION FACTS
Serving size: 1 thread (2.2 metric posts)
Servings per container: Approx. 7 frames per page
__________________________________________
Amount per serving
Colorings Trace Colorings from Fat Negligible
__________________________________________
________________________% Daily Value*
Total Awesomeness........54g....50%
Saturated Awesomeness..0g....0%
Win and/or 1337ness.........12g....50%
Teh R0x0r5 ....................64g....50%
____Dietary R0x0r5...........32g....50%
___________________________________________
* Percentage Daily Values are based on a 2,000 awesome
diet. Note that this cartoon gives you 200% recommended
daily value, hence making it teh shizzle. Your daily quota of
awesome may vary depending on your Ravenloft intake from
other sources. Consuming raw or undercooked awesome may
cause you to never need Viagra again in your life.
-
Phantom of the Sketchbook
- Agent of the Fraternity
- Posts: 74
- Joined: Sun Oct 28, 2007 4:33 pm
Ha ha, a done deal then! Thank you everyone for your enthusiasm. You are all too kind.
Special note goes to Lord Godefroi for his critique. Thank you, and I will certainly keep it all in mind. Since I've made pages 3-5 already I don't know if I can apply any advise just yet, but I'll take a look and see what I can do to make it more reader friendly. Again, thank you. It's good to receive input from someone with some seniority in this kind of work.
...HuManBing, that has to be the most intriguing praising I've seen in a while.
And so it has been decided: the story shall be continued. Upon the hour of midnight this November the 4th, I shall post the next page (and this time in the proper area). While I can, I will update this comic weekly.
The question remains though, in what way should I post said pages that would be most convenient for you guys?
I'd like to see it updated weekly over in the Fan Fiction forum, since it's essentially graphic fanfiction. That and, well, y'know, we really need more stuff happening over there. Very Happy
Fan Fiction forum sounds best, but I'll probably track this down anywhere you wish to put it.
I would like to apologize for misplacing this comic at first. I am, how would you say it...relatively new to this forum.12th! and moved to the Fan fic board!
Special note goes to Lord Godefroi for his critique. Thank you, and I will certainly keep it all in mind. Since I've made pages 3-5 already I don't know if I can apply any advise just yet, but I'll take a look and see what I can do to make it more reader friendly. Again, thank you. It's good to receive input from someone with some seniority in this kind of work.
...HuManBing, that has to be the most intriguing praising I've seen in a while.
And so it has been decided: the story shall be continued. Upon the hour of midnight this November the 4th, I shall post the next page (and this time in the proper area). While I can, I will update this comic weekly.
The question remains though, in what way should I post said pages that would be most convenient for you guys?