I need your help with a plot idea.
Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 6:11 pm
Ok fellow denizens of the dark I am in need of your wisdom. Ever since I got Gaz 3 many moons ago I have had an adventure idea swirling around in my head. But alas my normal group has been scattered to the four winds by military duty and life in general for over two years now. I have tried gathering a group to play via Openrpg but that too has proven a bust. Due to that my adventure idea has had to stay in the confines of my brain.
I have finaly gotten up the time and energy to write it down but im stuck with a dilemma- What would the players do? I have the full plot and even have a few NPCs written up but I have no real idea how the average player would react to the setup. Would they help the good guys or be drawn into the lies of the evil NPC
This is where you come in. As players how do you think you would take this plot and move with it? If I get enough responses I may try cleaning it up enough to submit it to QTR as a adventure.
So without further ado…. My Idea:
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Dm Setup-
July 14th Of current campaign year. Bastion Secousse of the Dementlian sect lies on her deathbed. She can feel the warm hands of Ezra beckoning and so she begins the summoning of all her fellow Anchorites so she may chose a worth successor. Rumor and speculation run rampant among the clergy. Warden Pineau is thought to be the favorite for succession, as he has become a sort of hero among the faithful due to his fire and brimstone sermons though his stance on eradication of heathen religions leaves him with few friends in the ranks. Another hopeful is Warden Caille. Bastion Secousse has thought of her as a segregate daughter over the last waning years and Caille has been at her side as the final days approached.
As her final hours dawned Bastion Secousse called both Pineau and Caille into her chambers. “As my last duty on this earth I shall name my worthy successor,” she spoke calmly, ”Armand, though you have the fire of faith running through you like the flames of the sun itself I feel it will one day burn too bright and consume you. That is why I must place my faith in Lionie. She has learned both faith and humility in her few years on this earth. Traits needed in the next leader of this church. May Ezra guide both of you through the mist to paradise…” And having said her last words she passed from this world into the next. Pineau turned graciously to Caille and offered his congratulations before retiring to his chambers to begin the ritual week long fasting for the dead as Caille prepared the body for viewing.
When he reached his chambers Pineau let loose a tirade of curses at the cold stone walls. He had planned to lead the church into a glorious new age where heathens would bow down to the goddesses glory. Furious he began digging through piles and piles of sacred documents hoping to find a loophole in the dogma that would allow him to challenge Caille’s succession. As he read day and night he came across a very stained and decaying book buried under piles of old scrolls. Turing to the first page he discovered it was the privet diary of one of the ancient priest of the old church many years ago.
In it he read of how the old priest had become obsessed with the devine secret to creating pure life from the very elements themselves. He toiled away in the catacombs under the cathedral for many years he wrote until the formula came to him in a vision. The priest tells in detailed accounting of how he mixed a plethora of foul chemicals and fouler potions one at a time until his first child rose from the vat. His writing then became hurried and ragged as he began doubting himself as to his creations very essence. He became convinced the child was nothing more then a cruel mockery of life, devoid of the divine spark, a soulless sacrilum. The diary ended there, as the reaming pages were soaked red with dried blood.
As he closed the book a foul thought arose in Pineau’s mind. Who better to place him at the head of her holy army…then the goddess herself.
On the eve of succession the anchorites gathered in the main hall to say one last farewell to Bastion Secousse before she was to be interred below in the catacombs. As Caille said the final prayer over the body the sky above the cathedral grew dark and stormy. A single bolt of lightning stuck the alter cracking it in half. When the smoke and flame died away in its place lay the form of a young girl (16ish), the spitting image of Ezra….
Over the last few months the Church has become swamped with believers who wish to bask in the miracle of the Lady. Even those who disbelieve that this is Ezra reborn walk away with a feeling of hope and well-being. In the last few weeks the Goddess has appointed Pineau her consort and has ordered a purging of unbelievers among the ranks of the clergy.
Forbidden Lore-
This new Ezra is actually an alchemetical child created by Pineau as part of his master plan. Using a scraping of blood from the churched piece of the shield of Ezra thought to be the Goddesses own he created the child to be in her exact image. Reading scripture to the growing fetus while still in the tank he has formed the girl to have almost encyclopedic knowledge of church dogma. He plans to use the girl to place himself as the front of a holy army and sweep across the western core. He plans to have the girl die by poison and frame Caille. He then will take it upon himself to kill her, making himself out to be a hero in the face of the faithful. These acts have effectively severed his relationship with the real goddess but the DP have intervened and are supplying his newly increased power (such as the lightning bolt he called down to disguise the Ezra child’s entrance).
What he doesn’t know if the Ezra child now truly believes herself to be the goddess. This belief is so strong that the Dark powers have even begun granting her the power to heal at a touch and even bring back the recently dead. She is currently unaware of Pineau’s plan and is quite content tending to her flock.
Warden Caille is currently having a crisis of faith. She truly wants to believe that the child is truly Erza but some how deep down she feels that this is all wrong. She fears her doubts will force to front of the churches new wave of persecution of the unbelieving
The PCs can enter in one of three ways-
For those adventuring on the western core before the events unfold there has been a rash of break-ins among the sages and scholars of the city. No money was stolen, only vials of expensive and dangerous chemicals. The Pcs are hired to hunt down the thief and recover the stolen goods. In reality the thief is Pineau. He has been stealing the nessary items required for the child. He has covered his tracks well however and has already set up a scapegoat in the church in case he if found out. If the PCs follow his trail they arrive at the cathedral just as the bolt of lightning strikes.
If they are outsiders or followers of another Ezra-Unfriendly religion they become caught up in the wave of religious furor and are imprisoned for heresy. While awaiting torture by Pineau’s thugs Warden Caille comes and frees them. In return she wants them to help her stop the madness and return with proof one way or another of the Childs divine nature before Pineau spreads his message further.
If the Pcs have ties to Dementlu or the Ezran church they receive invitations to attend Warden Caille’s succession ceremony. They are front and center for the child appearance.
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Now I need your help. What path would you chose if you were a player in this? Would you be more apt to believe the supposedly divine nature of the child and follow Pineaus mad plan or would you be more inclined to disbelieve the masses and hunt down the truth?
Any and all opinions/sujestions/idea/death threats…well not death threats…will be noted and are dearly wanted.
I have finaly gotten up the time and energy to write it down but im stuck with a dilemma- What would the players do? I have the full plot and even have a few NPCs written up but I have no real idea how the average player would react to the setup. Would they help the good guys or be drawn into the lies of the evil NPC
This is where you come in. As players how do you think you would take this plot and move with it? If I get enough responses I may try cleaning it up enough to submit it to QTR as a adventure.
So without further ado…. My Idea:
XXXXXXXXX
Dm Setup-
July 14th Of current campaign year. Bastion Secousse of the Dementlian sect lies on her deathbed. She can feel the warm hands of Ezra beckoning and so she begins the summoning of all her fellow Anchorites so she may chose a worth successor. Rumor and speculation run rampant among the clergy. Warden Pineau is thought to be the favorite for succession, as he has become a sort of hero among the faithful due to his fire and brimstone sermons though his stance on eradication of heathen religions leaves him with few friends in the ranks. Another hopeful is Warden Caille. Bastion Secousse has thought of her as a segregate daughter over the last waning years and Caille has been at her side as the final days approached.
As her final hours dawned Bastion Secousse called both Pineau and Caille into her chambers. “As my last duty on this earth I shall name my worthy successor,” she spoke calmly, ”Armand, though you have the fire of faith running through you like the flames of the sun itself I feel it will one day burn too bright and consume you. That is why I must place my faith in Lionie. She has learned both faith and humility in her few years on this earth. Traits needed in the next leader of this church. May Ezra guide both of you through the mist to paradise…” And having said her last words she passed from this world into the next. Pineau turned graciously to Caille and offered his congratulations before retiring to his chambers to begin the ritual week long fasting for the dead as Caille prepared the body for viewing.
When he reached his chambers Pineau let loose a tirade of curses at the cold stone walls. He had planned to lead the church into a glorious new age where heathens would bow down to the goddesses glory. Furious he began digging through piles and piles of sacred documents hoping to find a loophole in the dogma that would allow him to challenge Caille’s succession. As he read day and night he came across a very stained and decaying book buried under piles of old scrolls. Turing to the first page he discovered it was the privet diary of one of the ancient priest of the old church many years ago.
In it he read of how the old priest had become obsessed with the devine secret to creating pure life from the very elements themselves. He toiled away in the catacombs under the cathedral for many years he wrote until the formula came to him in a vision. The priest tells in detailed accounting of how he mixed a plethora of foul chemicals and fouler potions one at a time until his first child rose from the vat. His writing then became hurried and ragged as he began doubting himself as to his creations very essence. He became convinced the child was nothing more then a cruel mockery of life, devoid of the divine spark, a soulless sacrilum. The diary ended there, as the reaming pages were soaked red with dried blood.
As he closed the book a foul thought arose in Pineau’s mind. Who better to place him at the head of her holy army…then the goddess herself.
On the eve of succession the anchorites gathered in the main hall to say one last farewell to Bastion Secousse before she was to be interred below in the catacombs. As Caille said the final prayer over the body the sky above the cathedral grew dark and stormy. A single bolt of lightning stuck the alter cracking it in half. When the smoke and flame died away in its place lay the form of a young girl (16ish), the spitting image of Ezra….
Over the last few months the Church has become swamped with believers who wish to bask in the miracle of the Lady. Even those who disbelieve that this is Ezra reborn walk away with a feeling of hope and well-being. In the last few weeks the Goddess has appointed Pineau her consort and has ordered a purging of unbelievers among the ranks of the clergy.
Forbidden Lore-
This new Ezra is actually an alchemetical child created by Pineau as part of his master plan. Using a scraping of blood from the churched piece of the shield of Ezra thought to be the Goddesses own he created the child to be in her exact image. Reading scripture to the growing fetus while still in the tank he has formed the girl to have almost encyclopedic knowledge of church dogma. He plans to use the girl to place himself as the front of a holy army and sweep across the western core. He plans to have the girl die by poison and frame Caille. He then will take it upon himself to kill her, making himself out to be a hero in the face of the faithful. These acts have effectively severed his relationship with the real goddess but the DP have intervened and are supplying his newly increased power (such as the lightning bolt he called down to disguise the Ezra child’s entrance).
What he doesn’t know if the Ezra child now truly believes herself to be the goddess. This belief is so strong that the Dark powers have even begun granting her the power to heal at a touch and even bring back the recently dead. She is currently unaware of Pineau’s plan and is quite content tending to her flock.
Warden Caille is currently having a crisis of faith. She truly wants to believe that the child is truly Erza but some how deep down she feels that this is all wrong. She fears her doubts will force to front of the churches new wave of persecution of the unbelieving
The PCs can enter in one of three ways-
For those adventuring on the western core before the events unfold there has been a rash of break-ins among the sages and scholars of the city. No money was stolen, only vials of expensive and dangerous chemicals. The Pcs are hired to hunt down the thief and recover the stolen goods. In reality the thief is Pineau. He has been stealing the nessary items required for the child. He has covered his tracks well however and has already set up a scapegoat in the church in case he if found out. If the PCs follow his trail they arrive at the cathedral just as the bolt of lightning strikes.
If they are outsiders or followers of another Ezra-Unfriendly religion they become caught up in the wave of religious furor and are imprisoned for heresy. While awaiting torture by Pineau’s thugs Warden Caille comes and frees them. In return she wants them to help her stop the madness and return with proof one way or another of the Childs divine nature before Pineau spreads his message further.
If the Pcs have ties to Dementlu or the Ezran church they receive invitations to attend Warden Caille’s succession ceremony. They are front and center for the child appearance.
XXXXXXX
Now I need your help. What path would you chose if you were a player in this? Would you be more apt to believe the supposedly divine nature of the child and follow Pineaus mad plan or would you be more inclined to disbelieve the masses and hunt down the truth?
Any and all opinions/sujestions/idea/death threats…well not death threats…will be noted and are dearly wanted.