|
|


 |
 |
 |
 |
 |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
|
View unanswered posts | View active topics
|
Phantom of the Sketchbook
|
Post subject: Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:15 pm |
|
|
Agent of the Fraternity Joined: Sun Oct 28, 2007 4:33 pm Posts: 74
|
Ding Ding: Papa Legba, otherwise known as the Man at the Crossroads.

|
|
| Top |
|
 |
|
Isabella
|
Post subject: Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:24 pm |
|
|
Evil Genius Joined: Mon May 30, 2005 12:54 am Posts: 1328
|
Correct! (It was the pineapple thingies that gave it away, wasn't it?  ) I was, however, using this version as the base point:
Alternate veves - fun!
Still, you guessed right, so here's your e-cookie:
Hope you aren't allergic to looking at chocolate chips.
_________________ "We got outflanked by the Independent squad, and we're never gonna make it back to our platoon... We need to resort to cannibalism."
"That was fast. Don't we have rations or anything?"
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
|
Nathan of the FoS
|
Post subject: Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 8:04 pm |
|
|
Fiendish Enforcer Joined: Fri Nov 28, 2003 3:39 pm Posts: 4260 Location: San Francisco CA
|
Papa Legba...the Opener of the Gate.
H'm. I wonder what came through. 
_________________ FEAR JUSTICE.
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
|
Isabella
|
Post subject: Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 3:43 pm |
|
|
Evil Genius Joined: Mon May 30, 2005 12:54 am Posts: 1328
|
|
Aaaaaaaand we're back. With a ton of pretension.
_________________ "We got outflanked by the Independent squad, and we're never gonna make it back to our platoon... We need to resort to cannibalism."
"That was fast. Don't we have rations or anything?"
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
|
NeoTiamat
|
Post subject: Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 10:56 pm |
|
|
Evil Genius Joined: Tue Sep 12, 2006 5:00 pm Posts: 3428 Location: Raising the tricolour and shouting, "Liberté, égalité, fraternité!"
|
I think the last scene skewered any pretension the comic may have otherwise had.
Quote: "Have you lost your MIND, Desmarais?!"
_________________ During the French Revolution of 1830, Charles Maurice de Talleyrand-Perigord watched the French tricolour being raised over Notre-Dame.
"We are triumphing."
"Who is we?"
"Quiet! Not a word. I will tell you tomorrow."
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
|
Isabella
|
Post subject: Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:13 pm |
|
|
Evil Genius Joined: Mon May 30, 2005 12:54 am Posts: 1328
|
Nathan of the FoS wrote: Papa Legba...the Opener of the Gate. H'm. I wonder what came through. 
Like I said - be careful what assumptions you make; Papa Legba is the loa you have to call to talk to other loas, as well.
_________________ "We got outflanked by the Independent squad, and we're never gonna make it back to our platoon... We need to resort to cannibalism."
"That was fast. Don't we have rations or anything?"
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
|
ewancummins
|
Post subject: Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:44 am |
|
|
Champion of the Maiden Joined: Tue Oct 25, 2005 1:35 pm Posts: 7070 Location: Alexandria VA
|
|
It'll be interesting to see what happens with this, now that poor Benoit is dead. And how did he die, I wonder?
_________________ '' When I have a little money, I buy books. If anything is left, I buy food and clothes.'' - Erasmus
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
|
Isabella
|
Post subject: Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 2:46 pm |
|
|
Evil Genius Joined: Mon May 30, 2005 12:54 am Posts: 1328
|
|
Say goodbye to the digital artwork - it will return eventually.
At this point I began to experiment with different ways of doing the comic, and like most experiments the first tries were disasters. Today's strip I tried working with just pencil and paper to see how it would turn out; the answer is "could've been better", the scanner destroyed most the detail put in the image. Next will come attempts of ink and pencil (not so great) and just pen (originally awful, gets better).
So just hang in there for a bit.
_________________ "We got outflanked by the Independent squad, and we're never gonna make it back to our platoon... We need to resort to cannibalism."
"That was fast. Don't we have rations or anything?"
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
|
DocBeard
|
Post subject: Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 3:47 pm |
|
|
Evil Genius Joined: Mon Nov 05, 2007 5:35 pm Posts: 2100
|
|
I've gotta say, I'm really enjoying this. Your expressions are really clear and strong without beind overwhelming, reminding me somewhat of Don Bluth's early work. And most importantly, the characters are experiencing conflict and disagreement without losing their essential humanity: The girl and the priest don't feel "right" so much as two confused people who care about eachother, and that's what you want for an argument like that.
The growing sense of dread about the girl's also very neat. Looking forward to where this is going!
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
|
Rotipher of the FoS
|
Post subject: Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 7:19 am |
|
|
Thieving Crow Joined: Sat Dec 06, 2003 4:18 pm Posts: 4328
|
LadySoth wrote: Hopefully this is the correct place to post a comment, I didn't see any other threads for comments on this one . . .
Anyway, GREAT JOB!!!! I really loved the artwork and the storyline seems to be off to a great start! I can't wait to see what happens next. What type of software do you use to create the comic? It looks pretty professional. Keep up the good work, and sorry if I posted this comment in the wrong place.
[As it happens, the comic's own thread wasn't the right place to post this, so I moved it for you, LadySoth. No biggie.  - Roti]
_________________ "Who cares what the Dark Powers are? They're bastards! That's all I need to know of them." -- Crow
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
|
Isabella
|
Post subject: Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 2:05 pm |
|
|
Evil Genius Joined: Mon May 30, 2005 12:54 am Posts: 1328
|
|
Thank you both! You have no idea how much your comments mean to me.
Nothing much happens in that first strip, so you lucky folks get two.
There's something else not common in Souragne.
_________________ "We got outflanked by the Independent squad, and we're never gonna make it back to our platoon... We need to resort to cannibalism."
"That was fast. Don't we have rations or anything?"
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
 |
|
 |
|
Isabella
|
Post subject: Posted: Sat Mar 22, 2008 11:28 am |
|
|
Evil Genius Joined: Mon May 30, 2005 12:54 am Posts: 1328
|
|
Dear readers,
Due to deep-seated, unassuagable fears that I will lose your attention should the story run on too long, I will be posting over the weekend as well until this chapter is finished.
The entire comic is a set of 13 such stories, so do enjoy while it lasts.
(runs from the Phantom)
_________________ "We got outflanked by the Independent squad, and we're never gonna make it back to our platoon... We need to resort to cannibalism."
"That was fast. Don't we have rations or anything?"
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
|
Nathan of the FoS
|
Post subject: Posted: Sat Mar 22, 2008 11:53 am |
|
|
Fiendish Enforcer Joined: Fri Nov 28, 2003 3:39 pm Posts: 4260 Location: San Francisco CA
|
|
Ha! Somebody's been living inside the church for too long. I hope the apothecary has a lot of time on his hands, cuz he's gonna need it.
_________________ FEAR JUSTICE.
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
|
Isabella
|
Post subject: Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 12:46 pm |
|
|
Evil Genius Joined: Mon May 30, 2005 12:54 am Posts: 1328
|
|
Ladies and Gentlemen, page 24 is up, also known as "something finally happens."
Also another something unusual for Souragne. I considered renaming the comic "A Series of Very Unusual Events" but that's really what every adventure is....
_________________ "We got outflanked by the Independent squad, and we're never gonna make it back to our platoon... We need to resort to cannibalism."
"That was fast. Don't we have rations or anything?"
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
|
DocBeard
|
Post subject: Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 3:55 pm |
|
|
Evil Genius Joined: Mon Nov 05, 2007 5:35 pm Posts: 2100
|
|
"Fire...pretty..."
Also, hey, did that priest start sporting grayscales inbetween sending the girl out and going to pick her up? Get in a fight with a ghost?
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
Who is online |
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests |
|
You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot post attachments in this forum
|
|
|
 |
|
 |
|
|
|
 |
|
 |
|
 |