That sounds perfectly fine! Now for the small domain of Funan - the "prosperous south".
The placement of this could be tricky, but if Waldi is okay with me using the domain south of Hongjiangdu (southwest of the Liang) as Funan, then that's fine. Otherwise I can subdivide Liang.
The Funan folk are stout, rather short, and darker in skin tone than most Hua. However, they still view themselves as Hua, even though their dialect is completely incomprehensible to Hua ears. In time long past, sometimes ousted Emperors would flee to Funan, there to live out their lives in solitude amid the palm trees and tropical heat. The Zhengti script still applies here, but few people speak the Zhengyu tongue. The local dialect is Funanhua.
(Note: This domain is lovingly based on the province of my mother's family and all my aunts and uncles. I would like to dedicate Funan to them as an accurate snapshot of the fine spirit of the people of that land. ~ HMB)
Fuknaam, the Prosperous South (Fu Nan in Hua)
Far from Imperial oversight, the farflung domain of Fuknaam has long been a haven for smugglers, traders, unscrupulous merchants, and a general wretched hive of scum and villainy. They are so distant that the Dragons rarely care to visit their domain, and their pursuit of wealth and profits has made them careless of the Celestial Bureaucracy and temples.
Based on: Hong Kong, that hive of scum and villainy on Earth.
CL: (very roughly) 9 in Tsoy Luk, as low as 4 in inland areas.
Landscape: Once upon a time, the Fuknaam valleys and rivers were beautiful and picturesque. Ever since the Fukaam people arrived, however, much of the landscape has become cluttered with their dwellings, refuse, and pollution. It is said that rats plague the countryside of Funan as thickly as fleas on a dog - but the wiser of the Hua merely note that's because they can't stand the stench of the Fuknaam cities.
Major Settlements: A settler once thought that naming a capital "Riches Shores" (Cai Lu in Hua, Tsoy Luk in Funanese) would draw trade and commerce. Instead, it drew bandits, pirates, and prostitutes. Worse still, it drew the Fuknaamyun (Funanren, "Prosperous Southern People" in Hua). Tsoy Luk (pop. 125,000) dominates the domain, but smaller settlements dot the landscape like pustulous nipples on the bloated carcass of an upside-down sow floating in a river of effluvium with a winnet firmly affixed to its
--but I digress. The second largest city is Caizhou (90,000), which was established centuries ago as a garrison town by a forgotten Emperor. The locals call it Tsoyjuk, which can mean "Riches Land" or possibly "Vegetable Rice-Gruel".The local general, after arriving in Fuknaam, noted the people were unusually rebellious. Later on, he learned they were just naturally disagreeable, and amended his verdict to "moderately revolting" instead.
The Que city of Yang'An has been described as the "Courtesan of the East", for its allure and vice. By the same token, Tsoyluk counts as the "Bedbug of the East" - it's densely packed, it'll suck your blood dry, and you will probably end up spending the night with it, like it or not.
Population: The last Imperial survey raised the alarming possibility that the infestation had reached about 500,000. No censuses have since been attempted for fear of what horrid developments they might reveal.
Characters: The Hua Empire has several locations where the beauty of the local women are the subject of poems. Fuknaam is not one of them. In fact, a popular saying goes "If you find a good looking woman in Funan, she probably traveled there from somewhere else." Another saying goes "What do you call a Fuknaamyun man who enjoys sex more than he enjoys gold?"
"A pervert." Yet another saying goes "A Fuknaamyun walked under a bar." (The joke ends there.)
From this, it's easy to see that Fuknaam characters are short-statured, unlovely, and single-mindedly enamored of money.
Basically, they're dwarves aren't they?
Classes: Most Fuknaamyun slave away in the fields, or mills, or foundries. However, they have a reputation for spending money. Some do so very shrewdly (jokes about these usually start off "He walked out the door with a single
fen" and end with "and his family were feasting for days!"), while others are less savvy with money and more concerned with lavish expenditure. (A Fuknaamyun playboy flaunts his new overpriced jacket, saying "Do you like my new expensive jacket? I spent 300 kuai at Lo's Market!" Another playboy comes up to him and says "Aiya, you got ripped off! You could have spent 800 kuai for the same one at Ping's!".) Rogues are very common, as are bards. The Fuknaam find it hard to summon enough passion to go berserk over anything, so barbarian classes are mostly out (unless gold is at stake, in which case arguably every Fuknaamyun has been a barbarian at some point in their lives - usually at the cash register). The domain's pollution and dirt has driven off the Dragon, so wizards are rare, and the bustling materialism of the cities and wrenching labor of the countryside leaves little time or inclination to support a monastic order.
Worship of the Celestial Bureaucracy has fallen by the wayside, as the Fuknaamyun believe they are already making a tidy prophet.
Fuknaamyun are not well suited to fighting, and there is no formal army or navy, but fighters and sailors are found as long as they're being paid, cash up front.
All Fuknaamyun aspire to be the "daifun" (Da Kuan in Hua, "big money"), or one of the patrician families. The only entrance requirement is money and the willingness to do whatever it takes to make it.
Language: Fuknaamwa (Funanhua, dialect) is a cacophonous medley of nasals, linguals, and glottals that mix together with an effluvious yet incoherent plaintiveness. The Fuknaamyun have difficulty pronouncing "r" sounds, replacing them either with "y" or "l" (ell). An ancient Hua poet who traveled to Fuknaam as a forfeit for losing a bet later said he couldn't help but recall his finest conversations in Fuknaamwa, every time he heard the couple arguing next door.
Religion: Many clerics have tried to save the souls of the Fuknaamyun. This has given rise to the saying "zaau daan mei mou", or "searching for eyebrows on an egg".
The Law: Money is power, and power corrupts. The reigning patrician families control the port city and every transaction requires some sort of service to be done. Bribes and gifts are a way of life here, and it is said that life is cheap. (This is actually incorrect. Life is expensive, but death is often free.) In theory, there are a few laissez-faire laws prohibiting murder, rape, and other clearly antisocial behavior, but in practice money and connections are the true arbiters. The patrician families also do not rule absolutely - they need a constant stream of favors and exchanges to keep their place, and often enough a family falls from grace, to be replaced by one or two newcomers.
Trade: Fuknaam innkeepers are known for their officious service and warm hostility. After talking to merchants and inquiring of officials, visitors will note Fuknaamyun are quite economical with their compassion, their patience, and the truth. Ships from far and wide stop at the port, and here is perhaps the single place in the Hua Empire where your class and race do not matter, because all that speaks is gold.
Resources: Fuknaam is very cosmopolitan, and the relentless competition among its nobility has resulted in some staggering technological achievements. Where other Hua armies use bamboo firelances and "ZhugeNu" repeated crossbows, the Chow family has blended both and perfected a multi-shot rifle that can fire up to five rounds before it needs to be reloaded. The Ng family has used its ore mining business to reform the way it transports heavy loads, using steam engine technology to lay a limited railroad line from the shoreside mountain mines to the city. Meanwhile, the Yeung family has combined a contained steam engine within a sturdy metal-and-wood frame to produce a coal-powered ship that does not rely on wind for its propulsion.
In a pre-Industrial society, such advances are only possible with the resources of the noble class, and an exploitable cheap-labor working class. However, the innate rivalry of the houses means they are unlikely to share their knowledge, and the tight control by the inventing families prevents the effective dissemination of their technology.
Coinage: Each family prints its own notes and even mints its own coins. Simply finding out how much a coin is worth can be an alchemist's challenge.
Politics:
The Hua believe in Yujing as the center of the earthly plane, and the further away you go, the further you fall from its blessing. That means Fuknaam is a hideout for humans who have willingly left the bright center of the universe, thus earning themselves eternal damnation - or at the very least, lasting inconvenience. An old king of Liang once said living in Yujing is like spending the rest of your life with your enemies right by your side. (The quote then goes on, apocryphally, to say it still beats living with your friends if they're all Fuknaamyun.) The Fuknaamyun are too disorganized to form any provincial initiatives, and this has made Tsoyluk an attractive city for foreign crews to do business... as long as the foreigners have a good bargaining sense. One surprisingly effective chamber of commerce has been formed by some enterprising merchants from the Western Core in the city - it originally started off as an informal lunch meeting where westerners could exchange information on which officials could be trusted and how much to bribe them. It later grew in attendance and became a force for the patrician families to deal with as a diplomatic body.
It should come as no surprise to the reader that this august body of traders and merchants is called "The Tsoy Luk Club."
Offshore, a Siranga-Purang naval raider preys on cargo boats coming in and out of the port, giving his name only as "Lokukteoi" ("Twistleg" in Fuknaamwa). He and his band of pirates are ruthless, and there is a rumor that they have a powerful artifact that can call down the power of the sun upon enemy ships. He stops at any port he sees fit, and almost never needs to make landfall, ruling the seas with his self-declared "zan zung kyun" (Zhen Zhong Quan, true and final authority - sometimes written as "Real Ultimate Power").
Also, the lesser degree of Hua authority here means the Jomon-jin traders from the Western island of Jomon have been able to land and trade without needing permission from a local king. However, there are rumors that the traders bring with them the dreaded
ninja - spies and assassins from the Jomon courts. It is not even known whether any are in Fuknaam, but if they are, their goals are unknown. Quite possibly, they could be locked in an epic struggle against the pirates, aiming to steal away their
real ultimate power.
Darklord: Elsewhere in the Hua Empire, the forces of nature and the imposition of Mankind are in a deadly balance. Not so in Fuknaam. Here, the fires of the factories and the smoke of the engines blots out the sunlight for days on end, and the people have grown so desperate in their struggles that they live literally on top of each other. Now that the Dragon has left and appears to have no plans of coming back, all that is left is the beating heart of the city and its wretched inhabitants, slaving away.
However, not all is as it seems. The Fuknaamyun have cast off the guidance of spiritual beings, and trusting in their own infallibility, dig forth the bowels of the earth and trawl the belly of the sea for their industry and output. Sometimes, it almost seems as if something else is leading them...
A mechanical instrument of terror once took form, dreamed of in the past by a sage philosopher. Horrified, the philosopher took his own life shortly thereafter, but still he spoke of his fears - that the deeds of men would one day exceed their masters' powers of control. Just as the luminous being Akira, or the fabled Technological Singularity, a malignant being of evil has masked itself in the advances of science and awaits activation, through rivets, cogs, and ultimately, code.
The people of Fuknaam already have destroyed the idyllic seaside harbor that first awaited them here centuries ago. Now they are despoiling the land and sea, poisoning the rivers and skies and trampling themselves over as they push science ever onwards, drawing closer to the day when a single human hand can destroy millions with a single gesture.